From 5bd9e7c53d0f6510e74ca09f553cb1c3c300051b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Maxwell Salzberg Date: Mon, 8 Aug 2011 16:35:34 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] update email copy --- .../devise/mailer/_batch_invites.html.erb | 20 ++++++++++++------- 1 file changed, 13 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-) diff --git a/app/views/devise/mailer/_batch_invites.html.erb b/app/views/devise/mailer/_batch_invites.html.erb index a075cebf8..a7c463da7 100644 --- a/app/views/devise/mailer/_batch_invites.html.erb +++ b/app/views/devise/mailer/_batch_invites.html.erb @@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ - Get Connected + 1. Get Connected @@ -41,13 +41,13 @@ An international movement with a shared vision for a better web, DIASPORA*'s #1 + 2. Be Yourself
- Be Yourself
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ An international movement with a shared vision for a better web, DIASPORA*'s #1 + 3. Have Fun
- Expression is what makes the internet awesome. Because DIASPORA* is controlled by its users, you are free to express your identity and share in any way you want! + The Interent has given people find unique ways to express themselves online. Whether you want to remain anonymous, or make Diaspora the center of you online identity, DIASPORA* is your tool lets you be who you are, and share with the world in the way you want.
- Have Fun
@@ -69,8 +69,11 @@ An international movement with a shared vision for a better web, DIASPORA*'s #1 @@ -84,7 +87,10 @@ An international movement with a shared vision for a better web, DIASPORA*'s #1
- DIASPORA* is all about discovering amazing new content and people online. Cubbi.es, the world's first DIASPORA* application is just the begining. - Collect and share the web, in all of it's beautiful glory. + DIASPORA* is all about discovering amazing new content and people online. + + Cubbi.es, + the world's first DIASPORA* application is just the begining. + Collect and share the web, in all of its beautiful glory.
- DIASPORA* is open source software, and there has never been a better time to jump in than now! + DIASPORA* is made by people who love the Internet as much as you do. We would love it if you + joined our team, or + helped fund Diaspora + .