Fix type-o on front page, copy edit a bit.
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already_account: "already have an account?"
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already_account: "already have an account?"
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login_here: "log in here"
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login_here: "log in here"
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choice: "Choice"
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choice: "Choice"
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choice_explanation: "Diaspora allows you to sort your connections into groups called Aspects.
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choice_explanation: "Diaspora lets you sort your connections into groups called aspects. Unique to Diaspora, aspects ensure that your photos, stories and jokes are shared only with the people you intend."
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Unique to Diaspora, Aspects ensure your photos, stories and jokes are shared
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with only the people you want them to be."
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ownership: "Ownership"
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ownership: "Ownership"
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ownership_explanation: "You own your pictures, and you shouldn’t have to give that up just in order
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ownership_explanation: "You own your pictures, and you shouldn’t have to give that up just to share them. You maintain ownership of everything you share on Diaspora, giving you full control over how it's distributed."
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to share them. You maintain ownership of everything you share on Diaspora,
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giving you full control over how it is distributed."
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simplicity: "Simplicity"
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simplicity: "Simplicity"
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simplicity_explanation: "Diaspora makes sharing clean and easy – this goes doubly so for privacy.
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simplicity_explanation: "Diaspora makes sharing clean and easy – and this goes for privacy too. Inherently private, Diaspora doesn’t make you wade through pages of settings and options just to keep your profile secure."
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Innherently private, Diaspora doesn’t have pages of settings and options to
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wade through to keep your profile secure and to your liking."
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learn_about_host: "Learn about how to host your own Diaspora server"
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learn_about_host: "Learn about how to host your own Diaspora server"
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learn_about_open_source: "Learn more about Diaspora as an open source project."
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learn_about_open_source: "Learn more about Diaspora as an open source project."
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